Amit Part 1
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Submission date: 24-May-2021 03:06PM (UTC-0700)
Submission ID: 1592584930
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Amit Part 1
ORIGINALITY REPORT
PRIMARY SOURCES
www.bccdc.ca
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Submitted to University Canada West
Student Paper
www.bbc.com
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covid19dataportal.es
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portalgaruda.ilkom.unsri.ac.id
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Diana Bark, Nalin Dhillon, Martin St-Jean,
Brooke Kinniburgh, Geoff McKee, Alexandra
Choi. "SARS-CoV-2 transmission in K-12
schools in the Vancouver Coastal Health
Region: a descriptive epidemiologic study",
Cold Spring Harbor Laboratory, 2021
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daten-quadrat.de
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FINAL GRADE
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Amit Part 1
GRADEMARK REPORT
GENERAL COMMENTS
Instructor
Work on the language usage- Grammarly score
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Comment 1
Significance of the study?
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Unclear:
When making a point in one of your body paragraphs, one of the most common mistakes is
to not offer enough details. A paragraph without much detail will seem vague and sketchy. A
paper is always strengthened when your claims are as specific as possible, The more
detailed evidence you offer, the more reference points your reader will have. Remember that
you are communicating your argument to a reader who has only your description to go by.
Someone who reads your essay will not automatically know what you mean to express, so
you have to supply details, to show the reader what you mean, not just tell him or her.
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questions?
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This question is so broad and vague as it appears.
Comment 4
The research questions should be designed in a way that calls for further analysis.
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Comment 5
use a consistent form of hypothesis; either null or alternative hypothesis; not both
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Comment 6
Literature map is missing.
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Citation Needed
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Comment 7
-Provide a concrete theory that conceptualizes the core research problem and a model the
specifies this for the data analysis purpose. P.S: Specify the research setting and research
design that applies to your study.
- For secondary data coming from the statistics Canada or any other source, provide a
definitive data source and type that will be used in the analysis of this study. Where a
questionnaire is used, the type of questions that address the core research problem has to
be briefly mentioned in the study setting.
- Unnecessary details are included in this content; please, trim the fat.
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