A rewrite for the Purpose Statement

Hi. The problem statement is paper 1 attached that needs revision as it is to be included in paper 2 that needs revision of the purpose statement. The professor’s comments/feedback are in blue…so it is paper 2 ‘purpose statement’ that needs to be rewritten….but you will see that the problem statement needs to be fixed before you can rewire the purpose statement..I hope I making sense. On papers 1 & 2 attached..make sure you look to the left side..the professor left detailed feedback and directions there too….and directly on the paper. I have attached a word document with all the background information and specific details. Here is a link to the directions and I will also upload the file. I have a word and a pdf..not sure which you prefer https://1drv.ms/w/s!AvQ1_GGI8eBXvzi_h16BPUfc0sXYhttps https://documentcloud.adobe.com/link/review?uri=ur… Here are the directions as well: The Purpose Statement In this course, you have learned that a final problem statement normally takes many months to develop. Yet this week, you are asked to begin to develop the purpose statement. This is not because your problem statement is finalized but because it is time for you to evaluate and practice creating the rest of the common components of the doctoral capstone. This is part of the iterative process of preparing the capstone. Remember, though, that the assignments in this course are unlikely to be final versions of your study. The intention is to help you to understand and prepare for what you will need to write in your capstone. The purpose statement serves as the connection between the problem being addressed and the focus of the study. Depending on the methodology, in: Notes on Readings This week’s readings continue to provide information on how to review the research literature. Apply this guidance to your ongoing efforts to read and take notes interactively in the research relevant to your problem. The media and other resources, this week, will help you to develop your understanding of the purpose statement. The reading in the Single text, this week, can help you to fine tune your system for scholarly reading and note taking via the use of your citation management software. This week, Thomas provides detailed instructions about how to interact with, and review, the research literature. These skills are critical in your work on your doctorate. Learning Objectives Students will: Resources: I do not have digital copies of these, I am sorry. Single, P. B. (2010). Demystifying dissertation writing: A streamlined process from choice of topic to final text. Sterling, VA: Stylus Publishing. o Section 4.1, “Recording Citeable Notes and Building Your Literature Review” (pp. 81–85) Thomas, G. (2017). How to do your research project: A guide for students (3rd ed.). Thousand Oaks, CA: Sage. o “Purposes of Research” (pp. 6–7) More resources: https://mym.cdn.laureate-media.com/2dett4d/Walden/… Directions Assignment: The Purpose and Problem Statements To Prepare For this revision of your purpose and problem statements, apply what you have learned from the feedback you have received, as well as the information you have learned from the required readings, web resources, and media. Submit your draft. As in previous drafts, your paper should include the following: Note: Every statement must be substantiated by evidence from your research. Note: Connect the problem being addressed to the focus of your study. TEMPLATE TO USE:I WILL ALSO UPLOAD IT https://1drv.ms/w/s!AvQ1_GGI8eBXvzfB7HFPNwXNvElB I will also upload my problem statement with professor’s harsh feedback and the purpose stamen with even harsher feedback. Please help me. I am truly struggling with this class. Requirements: 4-5 Quantitative studies, state what needs to be studied by describing two or more factors (variables) and a conjectured relationship between (among) them related to the identified gap in practice or problem; Qualitative studies, describe the need for increased understanding about the issue to be studied (based on the identified gap or problem); and Mixed-methods studies (with both quantitative and qualitative aspects), clarify how the two approaches will be used together to inform the study. Apply technological tools to find, analyze, and evaluate existing research Analyze purpose statements Apply knowledge of APA references Apply knowledge of doctoral study Chapter 4, “Citeable Notes” Chapter 1, “Your Introduction: Starting Points” Chapter 3, “The Literature Review” (pp. 57-67) Title—refining the problem statement and purpose statement A basic introduction or background statement One or two specific and precise sentences that clearly state the problem A few paragraphs that synthesize the evidence from research literature that this is a current, meaningful problem in the educational discipline Substantiated statements using evidence from research One or two sentences that explain the purpose of your study Demonstration of a logical flow from the preliminary problem to this (narrower) tentative purpose in your study Explanation of what aspect of the problem your study address (In other words, what will it accomplish?)