Here is the professor’s feedback on M1 and M2.
M1
This is extremely general and does not propose a narrowly focused argument research essay. You have no specific time period or specific area or specific act of racial violence. Review some of your sources and see what examples they use in regards to racial violence and then focus on a specific event that is of most interest to you
M2
All of your sources are from the past 18 months and they are all academic journal articles. Why did you not try to find other source types? Moreover it is unclear if they are primary or secondary because of their publication date. It does not indicate if it was a long-term study and just happened to be published now. The Man and Spinner source appear to be primary sources.
Your annotations describe the source, but do not address the authors or how this will support your narrowly focused argument. These sources do look at racial violence, but there is not a narrow focus.
You failed to cite your sources correctly and completely in your preferred citation style – MLA, APA or Chicago. See attachments.
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